I
started revising my NaNoWriMo novel this past month. At the time it was titled Enlightened, but I
have since scratched that. Right now the
working title is The Dark Man. I’m not
exactly enamored with this either, but it’ll do for now:
The
bitch would not die.
Vines
wove around her limbs and girdled her slight frame, squeezing and crushing. Her once porcelain skin had turned an awkward
shade of purple. She should be dead by
now, but instead of kicking up her toes like a good little nature spirit, she
stood ramrod straight and her stormy grey-blue eyes bore into his.
Defiance.
That
was new, refreshing really.
I'm sure the perfect title will come to you. As for the six, I love your steady, confident writing style.
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by today! I figure the title will come to me at some point. I could live with The Dark Man.
DeleteIs that the intro? I like it, whatever it is! Like Jess said, the title will come to you.
ReplyDeleteIt's the opening lines. I was trying to set a tone. Thanks for stopping by!
DeleteOoo, very nice visual of the vines. Great six! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by, Joya! The vines get nastier as the scene progresses!
DeleteI love the title and love your new site. The background is fantastic.
ReplyDeleteThanks for checking it out. I'm concerned that it is a little dark i.e. hard to read, but it does portray the right tone. Thanks for letting me know about the typo. I need a copyeditor on retainer!
DeleteHi, I haven't been by in a while. Looks like you're doing well, the new site looks fantastic. I think the dark tone really matches the Dark King's Lover. Excellent!
ReplyDeleteThank for checking out my site and stopping by. It's still a work in progress.
DeleteThank you forr sharing
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